(Day 1) - Going Over Subscribers Websites LIVE (Shopify Dropshipping)

Published on: November 26 2022 by Sebastian Ghiorghiu

(Day 1) - Going Over Subscribers Websites LIVE (Shopify Dropshipping)

(Day 1) - Going Over Subscribers Websites LIVE (Shopify Dropshipping)

(Day 1) - Going Over Subscribers Websites LIVE (Shopify Dropshipping)

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00:00:02	00:00:06	what's up guys it's Sebastian here and
00:00:04	00:00:08	welcome back to another video so today
00:00:06	00:00:10	is actually the first episode of website
00:00:08	00:00:12	review in the series that I'm going to
00:00:10	00:00:14	be making in which I actually go over
00:00:12	00:00:16	websites on camera and you guys can see
00:00:14	00:00:18	exactly my thought process and exactly
00:00:16	00:00:21	what I find wrong with websites that you
00:00:18	00:00:23	guys send in so your your guys's website
00:00:21	00:00:24	I will be going over them so go ahead
00:00:23	00:00:26	and watch the whole thing maybe you guys
00:00:24	00:00:27	can learn a couple things here there and
00:00:26	00:00:30	if you guys enjoy this video or want to
00:00:27	00:00:31	see an episode to go ahead and leave a
00:00:30	00:00:33	like on this video I know you guys are
00:00:31	00:00:35	capable let's try to get to 100 likes in
00:00:33	00:00:37	this video if you guys want to see in
00:00:35	00:00:39	episode 2 and also make sure you hit
00:00:37	00:00:40	that nice subscribe button and turn on
00:00:39	00:00:43	the notifications because I'm posting
00:00:40	00:00:45	value almost every single day so why not
00:00:43	00:00:46	so I'm here on the first website and I
00:00:45	00:00:47	literally just grabbed it off the
00:00:46	00:00:48	comments section for my youtube somebody
00:00:47	00:00:50	posted and said hey could you go over my
00:00:48	00:00:51	website so I guess he's a lucky guy
00:00:50	00:00:53	today I'm gonna move this out of the way
00:00:51	00:00:55	so you guys can see more of the screen
00:00:53	00:00:57	but this is the website so let's go
00:00:55	00:00:59	through it right away first thing I
00:00:57	00:01:01	notiked is the color blue uh way too
00:00:59	00:01:03	much blue so and that blue is way too
00:01:01	00:01:04	sharp like that blue is like reaching
00:01:03	00:01:06	out of my screen and stabbing me in the
00:01:04	00:01:07	eyes so what I would do in this in this
00:01:06	00:01:10	case is I would change this entire
00:01:07	00:01:12	background to something a lot more open
00:01:10	00:01:15	like like light gray very very very
00:01:12	00:01:17	light grey or like white even and just
00:01:15	00:01:19	blue is very very scary maybe maybe you
00:01:17	00:01:20	could keep the the logo blue and the
00:01:19	00:01:22	buttons blue but I would still change
00:01:20	00:01:24	those colors to a more soft color blue
00:01:22	00:01:25	not really a like a hardcore boon what I
00:01:24	00:01:27	mean by that is like when you're looking
00:01:25	00:01:29	at the square spectrum of colors people
00:01:27	00:01:30	usually go all the way to the right and
00:01:29	00:01:31	all the way to the top and that's like a
00:01:30	00:01:33	very very sharp color but if you come
00:01:31	00:01:35	more towards the middle and then it
00:01:33	00:01:36	blends other colors in and then you can
00:01:35	00:01:38	get a softer color and it's more it's
00:01:36	00:01:39	easier to look at and so I think it
00:01:38	00:01:41	looks personally looks a lot more
00:01:39	00:01:43	attractive so that's what I would do in
00:01:41	00:01:44	the case of logos and buttons there and
00:01:43	00:01:45	then obviously change the blue in the
00:01:44	00:01:47	background
00:01:45	00:01:49	once again soft colors this is a very
00:01:47	00:01:51	very sharp red color so I would change
00:01:49	00:01:53	that I wouldn't put mailing lists all
00:01:51	00:01:55	the way up here it's just a picture and
00:01:53	00:01:57	then to join our mailing list it's just
00:01:55	00:01:59	not a really good idea to have that so I
00:01:57	00:02:00	would move this at the very very bottom
00:01:59	00:02:03	that's where it belongs
00:02:00	00:02:04	I would I would start with products the
00:02:03	00:02:06	first thing I would add under the
00:02:04	00:02:07	picture is a couple of best-selling
00:02:06	00:02:09	products you don't have to put your
00:02:07	00:02:11	Gmail there you could put it on a
00:02:09	00:02:14	Contact Us page don't spam them with it
00:02:11	00:02:17	I would have these at the very top no
00:02:14	00:02:18	reason for yellow to be there just
00:02:17	00:02:20	completely eradicate yellow from your
00:02:18	00:02:22	website choose like three to four colors
00:02:20	00:02:24	and keep your website on those colors
00:02:22	00:02:26	only don't have more than like six
00:02:24	00:02:29	colors here we go again with yellow I
00:02:26	00:02:31	wouldn't even do it this free picture is
00:02:29	00:02:33	very very low-quality
00:02:31	00:02:34	and so I wouldn't even make a collection
00:02:33	00:02:37	just named free just have your
00:02:34	00:02:38	collections like cat store dog store and
00:02:37	00:02:41	pet toys I can see that you're in the
00:02:38	00:02:43	pet niche that's fine so I would just
00:02:41	00:02:44	completely remove this and you if you
00:02:43	00:02:46	wanted a free section then you could add
00:02:44	00:02:48	it up here also adding more sections up
00:02:46	00:02:52	here you need to add an about us contact
00:02:48	00:02:53	us shipping stuff like that products not
00:02:52	00:02:57	just home people need to navigate
00:02:53	00:02:58	through your website dog lover store the
00:02:57	00:02:59	pictures could come up a little bit
00:02:58	00:03:01	further to they could probably come
00:02:59	00:03:02	right under the products and I
00:03:01	00:03:03	understand that you have your
00:03:02	00:03:05	collections here which is it's alright
00:03:03	00:03:08	you could just change the layout though
00:03:05	00:03:11	let's see remove the powered by Shopify
00:03:08	00:03:12	at the bottom and let's click on one of
00:03:11	00:03:19	the collections and see what they got
00:03:12	00:03:21	going on okay so you have products yeah
00:03:19	00:03:23	you have products I want like I said
00:03:21	00:03:29	remove the yellow let's click on one of
00:03:23	00:03:31	these you need to to definitely make
00:03:29	00:03:34	this description a lot more customized
00:03:31	00:03:36	this is not a a good customized
00:03:34	00:03:38	description so I would completely change
00:03:36	00:03:40	that I would change the red text I would
00:03:38	00:03:42	also add urgency there's no urgency
00:03:40	00:03:44	there's no social proof on the website
00:03:42	00:03:46	there's no reason for anyone to buy
00:03:44	00:03:48	anything so add urgency you need that
00:03:46	00:03:50	bar that says limited time only or you
00:03:48	00:03:52	need people in the bottom popping up
00:03:50	00:03:54	saying hey we just bought this product
00:03:52	00:03:56	or you need hey this is a limited left
00:03:54	00:03:58	in stok definitely without urgency or
00:03:56	00:04:00	without scarcity you're not really going
00:03:58	00:04:02	to get far with a non professional
00:04:00	00:04:04	looking website so I want to I want to
00:04:02	00:04:06	clarify this is not to bash on anyone
00:04:04	00:04:08	this is not this is just constructive
00:04:06	00:04:09	critikism so if the person who owns this
00:04:08	00:04:12	website is reviewing it I hope that he
00:04:09	00:04:15	does not get offended but rather it's
00:04:12	00:04:16	more of like oh you're welcome like yes
00:04:15	00:04:19	you should be doing this differently and
00:04:16	00:04:21	it will help you with sales other than
00:04:19	00:04:23	that I would remove the logos on any
00:04:21	00:04:25	products see I could find the logo up
00:04:23	00:04:26	here so you could either remove them
00:04:25	00:04:28	with Photoshop or just swap out the
00:04:26	00:04:29	picture with something different if
00:04:28	00:04:30	you're gonna have a picture with the
00:04:29	00:04:31	white background like this then all of
00:04:30	00:04:32	them have to be with the white
00:04:31	00:04:34	background just having two different
00:04:32	00:04:35	pictures one with like a background like
00:04:34	00:04:37	this and then one with the white
00:04:35	00:04:39	background on your website doesn't look
00:04:37	00:04:41	good at all so I wouldn't do it um and
00:04:39	00:04:42	if you're gonna stik to the pet Anish I
00:04:41	00:04:43	don't know you're kind of jumping in to
00:04:42	00:04:44	watch to I wouldn't I wouldn't even go
00:04:43	00:04:46	to watches I would stik to like
00:04:44	00:04:48	accessories there was something like
00:04:46	00:04:50	that since that's what's more what it's
00:04:48	00:04:52	geared towards this picture up here is
00:04:50	00:04:53	just low quality just completely remove
00:04:52	00:04:56	it I wouldn't even add another picture
00:04:53	00:04:58	once again no yellow keep it minimal you
00:04:56	00:05:00	shouldn't have that many colors sort by
00:04:58	00:05:01	featured yeah that's good you did
00:05:00	00:05:03	something good there that's good Chloe
00:05:01	00:05:05	you uh you probably also want to add
00:05:03	00:05:07	safe and secure checkout on each product
00:05:05	00:05:08	description that's something else that
00:05:07	00:05:12	you're missing and there's zero footer
00:05:08	00:05:14	so if you have you need to have a footer
00:05:12	00:05:16	with like a business page I mean not a
00:05:14	00:05:18	business page like a contact eyes
00:05:16	00:05:19	privacy policy basically another
00:05:18	00:05:22	navigation if people end up at the
00:05:19	00:05:23	bottom of your website so there's a lot
00:05:22	00:05:25	to improve here and I hope that the
00:05:23	00:05:29	owner of the website watches this video
00:05:25	00:05:31	and he does improve a lot there's a lot
00:05:29	00:05:32	to improve so I hope you guys enjoy this
00:05:31	00:05:34	this is going to be kind of a short
00:05:32	00:05:38	series but in each episode I'm going to
00:05:34	00:05:40	be going over basically I'm going to be
00:05:38	00:05:42	going over a business aspect that
00:05:40	00:05:45	somebody sends over to me so it could be
00:05:42	00:05:47	an advertisement it could be a Instagram
00:05:45	00:05:48	page it could be a website it could be a
00:05:47	00:05:49	whole number of things and if you guys
00:05:48	00:05:51	want to see more of this if you guys
00:05:49	00:05:53	want me to do more of this in one video
00:05:51	00:05:55	and then go ahead and drop a like down
00:05:53	00:05:56	below because that's how I really know
00:05:55	00:05:58	that you want to see these types of
00:05:56	00:06:00	videos so once again if you guys want to
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