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(Day 1) - Going Over Subscribers Websites LIVE (Shopify Dropshipping)

Published on: November 26 2022 by Sebastian Ghiorghiu

(Day 1) - Going Over Subscribers Websites LIVE (Shopify Dropshipping)

(Day 1) - Going Over Subscribers Websites LIVE (Shopify Dropshipping)

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00:00:02 00:00:06 what's up guys it's Sebastian here and
00:00:04 00:00:08 welcome back to another video so today
00:00:06 00:00:10 is actually the first episode of website
00:00:08 00:00:12 review in the series that I'm going to
00:00:10 00:00:14 be making in which I actually go over
00:00:12 00:00:16 websites on camera and you guys can see
00:00:14 00:00:18 exactly my thought process and exactly
00:00:16 00:00:21 what I find wrong with websites that you
00:00:18 00:00:23 guys send in so your your guys's website
00:00:21 00:00:24 I will be going over them so go ahead
00:00:23 00:00:26 and watch the whole thing maybe you guys
00:00:24 00:00:27 can learn a couple things here there and
00:00:26 00:00:30 if you guys enjoy this video or want to
00:00:27 00:00:31 see an episode to go ahead and leave a
00:00:30 00:00:33 like on this video I know you guys are
00:00:31 00:00:35 capable let's try to get to 100 likes in
00:00:33 00:00:37 this video if you guys want to see in
00:00:35 00:00:39 episode 2 and also make sure you hit
00:00:37 00:00:40 that nice subscribe button and turn on
00:00:39 00:00:43 the notifications because I'm posting
00:00:40 00:00:45 value almost every single day so why not
00:00:43 00:00:46 so I'm here on the first website and I
00:00:45 00:00:47 literally just grabbed it off the
00:00:46 00:00:48 comments section for my youtube somebody
00:00:47 00:00:50 posted and said hey could you go over my
00:00:48 00:00:51 website so I guess he's a lucky guy
00:00:50 00:00:53 today I'm gonna move this out of the way
00:00:51 00:00:55 so you guys can see more of the screen
00:00:53 00:00:57 but this is the website so let's go
00:00:55 00:00:59 through it right away first thing I
00:00:57 00:01:01 notiked is the color blue uh way too
00:00:59 00:01:03 much blue so and that blue is way too
00:01:01 00:01:04 sharp like that blue is like reaching
00:01:03 00:01:06 out of my screen and stabbing me in the
00:01:04 00:01:07 eyes so what I would do in this in this
00:01:06 00:01:10 case is I would change this entire
00:01:07 00:01:12 background to something a lot more open
00:01:10 00:01:15 like like light gray very very very
00:01:12 00:01:17 light grey or like white even and just
00:01:15 00:01:19 blue is very very scary maybe maybe you
00:01:17 00:01:20 could keep the the logo blue and the
00:01:19 00:01:22 buttons blue but I would still change
00:01:20 00:01:24 those colors to a more soft color blue
00:01:22 00:01:25 not really a like a hardcore boon what I
00:01:24 00:01:27 mean by that is like when you're looking
00:01:25 00:01:29 at the square spectrum of colors people
00:01:27 00:01:30 usually go all the way to the right and
00:01:29 00:01:31 all the way to the top and that's like a
00:01:30 00:01:33 very very sharp color but if you come
00:01:31 00:01:35 more towards the middle and then it
00:01:33 00:01:36 blends other colors in and then you can
00:01:35 00:01:38 get a softer color and it's more it's
00:01:36 00:01:39 easier to look at and so I think it
00:01:38 00:01:41 looks personally looks a lot more
00:01:39 00:01:43 attractive so that's what I would do in
00:01:41 00:01:44 the case of logos and buttons there and
00:01:43 00:01:45 then obviously change the blue in the
00:01:44 00:01:47 background
00:01:45 00:01:49 once again soft colors this is a very
00:01:47 00:01:51 very sharp red color so I would change
00:01:49 00:01:53 that I wouldn't put mailing lists all
00:01:51 00:01:55 the way up here it's just a picture and
00:01:53 00:01:57 then to join our mailing list it's just
00:01:55 00:01:59 not a really good idea to have that so I
00:01:57 00:02:00 would move this at the very very bottom
00:01:59 00:02:03 that's where it belongs
00:02:00 00:02:04 I would I would start with products the
00:02:03 00:02:06 first thing I would add under the
00:02:04 00:02:07 picture is a couple of best-selling
00:02:06 00:02:09 products you don't have to put your
00:02:07 00:02:11 Gmail there you could put it on a
00:02:09 00:02:14 Contact Us page don't spam them with it
00:02:11 00:02:17 I would have these at the very top no
00:02:14 00:02:18 reason for yellow to be there just
00:02:17 00:02:20 completely eradicate yellow from your
00:02:18 00:02:22 website choose like three to four colors
00:02:20 00:02:24 and keep your website on those colors
00:02:22 00:02:26 only don't have more than like six
00:02:24 00:02:29 colors here we go again with yellow I
00:02:26 00:02:31 wouldn't even do it this free picture is
00:02:29 00:02:33 very very low-quality
00:02:31 00:02:34 and so I wouldn't even make a collection
00:02:33 00:02:37 just named free just have your
00:02:34 00:02:38 collections like cat store dog store and
00:02:37 00:02:41 pet toys I can see that you're in the
00:02:38 00:02:43 pet niche that's fine so I would just
00:02:41 00:02:44 completely remove this and you if you
00:02:43 00:02:46 wanted a free section then you could add
00:02:44 00:02:48 it up here also adding more sections up
00:02:46 00:02:52 here you need to add an about us contact
00:02:48 00:02:53 us shipping stuff like that products not
00:02:52 00:02:57 just home people need to navigate
00:02:53 00:02:58 through your website dog lover store the
00:02:57 00:02:59 pictures could come up a little bit
00:02:58 00:03:01 further to they could probably come
00:02:59 00:03:02 right under the products and I
00:03:01 00:03:03 understand that you have your
00:03:02 00:03:05 collections here which is it's alright
00:03:03 00:03:08 you could just change the layout though
00:03:05 00:03:11 let's see remove the powered by Shopify
00:03:08 00:03:12 at the bottom and let's click on one of
00:03:11 00:03:19 the collections and see what they got
00:03:12 00:03:21 going on okay so you have products yeah
00:03:19 00:03:23 you have products I want like I said
00:03:21 00:03:29 remove the yellow let's click on one of
00:03:23 00:03:31 these you need to to definitely make
00:03:29 00:03:34 this description a lot more customized
00:03:31 00:03:36 this is not a a good customized
00:03:34 00:03:38 description so I would completely change
00:03:36 00:03:40 that I would change the red text I would
00:03:38 00:03:42 also add urgency there's no urgency
00:03:40 00:03:44 there's no social proof on the website
00:03:42 00:03:46 there's no reason for anyone to buy
00:03:44 00:03:48 anything so add urgency you need that
00:03:46 00:03:50 bar that says limited time only or you
00:03:48 00:03:52 need people in the bottom popping up
00:03:50 00:03:54 saying hey we just bought this product
00:03:52 00:03:56 or you need hey this is a limited left
00:03:54 00:03:58 in stok definitely without urgency or
00:03:56 00:04:00 without scarcity you're not really going
00:03:58 00:04:02 to get far with a non professional
00:04:00 00:04:04 looking website so I want to I want to
00:04:02 00:04:06 clarify this is not to bash on anyone
00:04:04 00:04:08 this is not this is just constructive
00:04:06 00:04:09 critikism so if the person who owns this
00:04:08 00:04:12 website is reviewing it I hope that he
00:04:09 00:04:15 does not get offended but rather it's
00:04:12 00:04:16 more of like oh you're welcome like yes
00:04:15 00:04:19 you should be doing this differently and
00:04:16 00:04:21 it will help you with sales other than
00:04:19 00:04:23 that I would remove the logos on any
00:04:21 00:04:25 products see I could find the logo up
00:04:23 00:04:26 here so you could either remove them
00:04:25 00:04:28 with Photoshop or just swap out the
00:04:26 00:04:29 picture with something different if
00:04:28 00:04:30 you're gonna have a picture with the
00:04:29 00:04:31 white background like this then all of
00:04:30 00:04:32 them have to be with the white
00:04:31 00:04:34 background just having two different
00:04:32 00:04:35 pictures one with like a background like
00:04:34 00:04:37 this and then one with the white
00:04:35 00:04:39 background on your website doesn't look
00:04:37 00:04:41 good at all so I wouldn't do it um and
00:04:39 00:04:42 if you're gonna stik to the pet Anish I
00:04:41 00:04:43 don't know you're kind of jumping in to
00:04:42 00:04:44 watch to I wouldn't I wouldn't even go
00:04:43 00:04:46 to watches I would stik to like
00:04:44 00:04:48 accessories there was something like
00:04:46 00:04:50 that since that's what's more what it's
00:04:48 00:04:52 geared towards this picture up here is
00:04:50 00:04:53 just low quality just completely remove
00:04:52 00:04:56 it I wouldn't even add another picture
00:04:53 00:04:58 once again no yellow keep it minimal you
00:04:56 00:05:00 shouldn't have that many colors sort by
00:04:58 00:05:01 featured yeah that's good you did
00:05:00 00:05:03 something good there that's good Chloe
00:05:01 00:05:05 you uh you probably also want to add
00:05:03 00:05:07 safe and secure checkout on each product
00:05:05 00:05:08 description that's something else that
00:05:07 00:05:12 you're missing and there's zero footer
00:05:08 00:05:14 so if you have you need to have a footer
00:05:12 00:05:16 with like a business page I mean not a
00:05:14 00:05:18 business page like a contact eyes
00:05:16 00:05:19 privacy policy basically another
00:05:18 00:05:22 navigation if people end up at the
00:05:19 00:05:23 bottom of your website so there's a lot
00:05:22 00:05:25 to improve here and I hope that the
00:05:23 00:05:29 owner of the website watches this video
00:05:25 00:05:31 and he does improve a lot there's a lot
00:05:29 00:05:32 to improve so I hope you guys enjoy this
00:05:31 00:05:34 this is going to be kind of a short
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00:05:34 00:05:40 be going over basically I'm going to be
00:05:38 00:05:42 going over a business aspect that
00:05:40 00:05:45 somebody sends over to me so it could be
00:05:42 00:05:47 an advertisement it could be a Instagram
00:05:45 00:05:48 page it could be a website it could be a
00:05:47 00:05:49 whole number of things and if you guys
00:05:48 00:05:51 want to see more of this if you guys
00:05:49 00:05:53 want me to do more of this in one video
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00:05:55 00:05:58 that you want to see these types of
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